I Believe Essay Samples

The name Credo means “I believe.” As part of our application process, students are asked to write an essay entitled “What I Believe.”  Following are excerpts from these essays from Credo students:

I believe that people who have been raised without compassion have none to give, and think of everything that they do not wholly comprehend as something that must be destroyed. To resist and remedy this, then, we have to give children our whole-hearted love and affection at an early age, so that, when they are grown and the future of our planet lies in their hands, they will have the wisdom and benevolence to shape it well.

Through music and good friendships I have discovered my passion in life. It has made me a global citizen. I wish more people would not just care about the earth but really do something for it and take a stance. I believe that the only thing holding you back is yourself.

I believe that the world is never going to evolve without independent thinkers. Such thinkers, who have not yet been trained to think a particular way, are so much more open-minded and interested by ordinary things and consider all happenings a phenomenon.

I hope that people can allow themselves to be more open and less afraid and therefore make the right decisions. Humanity and civilizations have been devastated by people’s greed and fear, and yet we still develop despite the many mistakes we make. I believe that’s what it means to be human: to continue to create, gracefully, after tragedy.


I believe that art is one of the most important things a human can do. I don’t think art has to be beautiful; I think it just has to mean something. I believe that art is a physical expression of love.

I believe that the person I am today is because of my experiences yesterday, and the days before that. The choices I make today will shape my future tomorrow, and if I try hard, my future will be as great, exciting and open as it can be.

I believe in learning from mistakes so that it is possible to laugh about them later. I think it is important to be able to lighten up when things go wrong. It’s important to try to correct whatever can be corrected, but also to not be too hard on yourself or on other people. This helps everyone learn responsibility.

I believe in friends. For me, friends are most important, especially the ones who will always be there for you, stand up for you, protect you. When you have a good group of friends, you have community.

I believe that treating all things, including Mother Nature, with love and care is the key to happiness…I need to pace myself in utilizing resources, giving the earth a chance to reproduce these gifts. Just as in my relationships with others are ones of give and take; my relationship with the earth is as well. I must remember to give back that which is beneficial to the earth. By recycling, using my bike as transportation, and working in my family’s garden, I make important effort to give back to this earth that gives me so much.

When I sing, all my anger flows out and I can just let go. Other people may scream and yell and break stuff, but I just sing.

I believe friends and family are the most important things in life—without them you have nothing.  And I believe alien life exists, because in such a vast universe there must be life out there somewhere, right?

I believe that education saves lives, that children should grow up feeling safe and that everyone deserves a second chance.

I believe capital punishment is ridiculous. First of all, if someone has, for example, committed murder, it’s not right to kill them. Then you’re just as bad as the person who killed someone, and they don’t get the chance to become a good person.

I believe that being scared or worried that something is going to happen will get you nowhere in life. You have to choose that nothing bad will happen to you and then nothing bad will. You have to choose not to be scared.

I believe in learning for life, which is why I love Waldorf education. We learn how to think in different ways. If knowledge is power and thinking gets you knowledge, then thinking in as many different ways as you can is a very powerful thing.

I believe that soon the majority of the world will realize how children’s brains truly work and all schools will become more like Waldorf schools.

I believe in freedom. Asia and Africa are the two main continents where boys and girls are forced to work and are sold as slaves. Here, in a grocery store, you can buy food that is either fair trade or not fair trade. This shouldn’t be an option. I believe one day the world will cease having child labor.

I believe that if we work together with not only the adults in the world, but the children as well, we can find a solution to anything.

I believe that the person I am today is because of my experiences yesterday, and the days before that. The choices I make today will shape my future tomorrow, and if I try hard, my future will be as great, exciting and open as it can be.

I believe that community involvement is very important and I feel a great responsibility to help my community by sharing my talents. I feel that it is important to help regardless of age, and that everyone has something they can bring to the table to make their community safe and also peaceful.

I believe that music is the answer to many problems that we face in this world. I also believe in world peace. I believe that through the many different genres of music, people could listen to what type of music they like and be in their own personal “peace.”


One thing that I believe is that everyone should have the right to be unique. I don’t like it when kids expect you to be like everybody else. I never really knew the point of a group of people all looking or acting the same.

“Doing homework” by Predi is licensed under CC BY-ND 2.0


In this power lesson shared by high school English teacher Cynthia Ruiz, students write their own personal statements of belief. The essay pushes students to write about something that matters to them and helps them get to know each other on a deeper level.


I used to assign a “Letter to the Teacher” at the beginning of every year to get a snapshot of how a student writes while simultaneously learning background information. Being completely honest, this assignment is also an easy way to get the first few back-to-school days started when a 90-minute class period feels like 900 minutes, because everyone is typically on their best behavior and not talking much. Although I enjoy reading the letters, the assignment doesn’t lend itself to revising and is written only for a specific, one-person audience.

I know building relationships with students is important and a way to get to know them is through their writing, so I did some research to see what other teachers were trying. I came across the “This I Believe” site and immediately liked the concept better than an introduction letter for a teacher.

Assignment Guidelines

The first time I assigned a “This I Believe” essay was in the fall of 2014, during the second week of school. I planned it as a year-long endeavor, something we could work on as a distraction from other essays required to prepare for state testing. This past year, I did not assign it until late April; it would be our last major writing task. I wanted to give everyone plenty of time to write but held them to a firm deadline of having four weeks to work.

This time, I crafted my writing guidelines according to those posted on the NPR site that hosts hundreds of This I Believe essays from around the world. My rubric still has some typical writing conventions, but overall I think it focuses more on student voice than structure. I made it clear that students had a lot of choice regarding both content and format. The biggest restriction came directly from the This I Believe site: a 500-600 word limit. I know a lot of writing teachers are divided when it comes to word count, but I figured it was still better than giving a specific number of required paragraphs and sentences.

One other requirement was that students use at least three “vocabulary devices.” This may seem like a restriction, but it actually supported student voice. Over the spring semester, we spent a lot of time reviewing both rhetorical and literary devices (anaphora, hypothetical questions, simile) and I told students to focus on the devices they genuinely felt comfortable using.

Helping Students Choose a Topic

Because the rubric leaves room for a lot of choice, I encouraged students to visit the featured essays site and not only read, but listen to real examples. I wanted them to see that this wasn’t just another run-of-the-mill assignment, that what they believe is important and writing is just one way to share those beliefs. I also made it a point to tell them our end goal was to share this essay with their entire class by way of a gallery walk.

After giving students time to explore the site, I had them “rush write” in their notebooks to see what immediate ideas they captured to help start the brainstorming process. Here’s the prompt I used:

This I Believe
For 2 minutes:
List words or ideas that you think about when you think of YOUR LIFE.
(Can be feelings, symbols, names, events, etc.)

After students generated this list, I asked them to consider what they wanted to write about and share with others. I wanted them to imagine a larger audience and think outside of meeting my expectations.

For some, deciding what to write about was easy and they began drafting immediately. However, the majority of students struggled not so much with what they believe, but how to write about it. Even though they appreciated having so much choice, they still needed some direction to get started.

We continued the listing strategy by focusing on “most memorables”: most memorable events in life so far, most memorable stuffed animal, most memorable friends, family experiences, life lessons learned, and so on. I asked them to focus on why they remember what they remember, and whether or not it impacts any of their beliefs. One student remembered a saying his grandmother always told him that still provides comfort as he’s gotten older. Another focused on her family not having a big house when they first moved to America and how she’s learned to be satisfied with opportunities instead of possessions. While this strategy helped a lot of light bulbs go off, it didn’t work for everyone.

Another strategy I tried was using involved sentence stems: I know I am the way I am today because______. I know I think about things the way I do because _______. I think most people would describe me as ______. I emphasized that these phrases did not have to be included in their final products, but should help generate ideas. I talked with a few frustrated students about this strategy and they told me it made them realize they’ve never really had to think about themselves in this way, but ultimately, it gave them direction for their essays.

Drafting and Revising

Because of block scheduling, I gave students about a week and a half to complete a working draft, which required having at least two paragraphs of their essay done. I only gave a portion of two to three class periods to actually write in class; students were expected to write on their own time.

On the day drafts were due, I set aside class time for revision. I asked students to refer to the rubric and focus on voice and vocabulary strategies. Questions I told them to consider were: Does this sound like me? Do I talk like this to my friends or family? I gave students the option of reviewing their own essays or partnering up with someone to peer edit. Again, this was the end of the year, so we had already established a pretty firm community of trust in class. I don’t know if peer editing would have been as easy had I done the assignment early in the year.

Overall, draft day didn’t feel like the usual “revising and editing” days we’ve had with other essays. Students were very concerned with whether or not they were making sense, if they should add more, or if they were being too repetitive, rather than only being concerned about capitalization, spelling, and grammatical errors.

Sharing the Finished Essays

The culmination of this assignment was when the essays were shared in a gallery walk. The gallery walk is my answer to having students write for a larger audience, and it really helps this essay become about what students have to say instead of just another grade. I can’t count how many times I have returned tediously graded essays only to have a kid immediately walk over to the recycling bin and trash it! Sure he read the comments and suggestions I made, or saw the cute smiley face I left by an excellent word choice, but it didn’t mean much to him because the paper is graded and finished, and he is now done thinking about it. With a gallery walk, not only are students thinking about what they wrote, but they have the opportunity to think about what their classmates wrote as well.

I printed each essay without any names, and made sure any identifying statements were revised. However, there were quite a few students who said they were proud of what they wrote and had no problem if others knew which essay belonged to them. Because not every student turned in a final copy, I printed additional copies of some completed essays to ensure every student had something to read during our gallery walk, instead of drawing attention to the two or three students who did not finish the assignment.

I placed the essays on different tables throughout the room and allowed students to move around as needed; some chose to stand and read an essay, others opted to sit, while others sprawled out on the floor to read. I played soft music and asked that the room volume stay quiet enough to be able to hear the music at all times. I didn’t mind if students were sharing and discussing, and I really wish I recorded the various conversations and comments I overheard that day: “Wow! Did you read this one yet?” “Man. Who wrote this? I might cry. Good tears, though.” “This one is life, Ms. Ruiz.”

I provided a pad of post-its near each essay and told students to leave POSITIVE feedback for each other. I provided sentence stems to help:

Something I liked…

Something I can relate to/agree with…

Something that surprised me…

Something I want to know more about…

I really think…

I periodically checked to make sure no one was being inappropriately critical or just leaving cute hearts or check marks. I wanted students to think about what they were reading, and understand that feedback is a crucial part of the writing process

After about 40 minutes, each essay had received multiple written comments, looking similar to the picture below:

Overall, the feedback was uplifting and actually created a sense of belonging in each class. Students told me they learned so much about each other that day and were shocked by their classmates’ writing. A few said they wished they had written this essay sooner.

Sample Student Work

I was floored by some of the essays I received. Some made me laugh, some made me gasp, some made me cry. Compared to the typical papers I usually assign, this essay allowed my students to not just think about what they were writing but to care about their writing and to be intentional in the language they were using, both in word choice and rhetorical strategies, because it was about what they believe. It is some of the strongest student writing I have ever received as an English teacher.

Here are some sample paragraphs from students who gave me permission to share their work:

From a student who told me he hates school and hates writing.


From a student who by all outward appearances, comes from a traditional family.


From a student battling depression and anxiety.


From a student who missed almost a whole semester but is trying to stay in school.


Although this essay helped end the year with a strong sense of community, I think teachers could easily have students write it at the beginning of the school year or even in January at the start of a new year. I’d love to hear how other teachers have used an essay like this in their classes. ♦


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